Jack and Lia, two young teenagers, run from Vancouver police after murdering Mr. Landon, Lias father. Through fate, they meet two people that send them across the border to a small mining town in Montana for them to live the rest of their lives together. Full of tears and challenges, Jack and Lia learn about love, lust, and how you can never run from your past and well kept secrets. It's an emotional ride with nothing left out. It's as raw and true as you can get. Comments : First, an interesting piece from what appears to be a unique perspective. I like how you are dissecting the human psyche as it goes through the push-pull of internal debate, of balancing hopes against fears, of offsetting the thrill of the new future versus the cynicism of the known past, and love versus lust. Overall, you engaged the senses of sight, smell, hearing and touch quite well, so high marks for sensory...I think you did a good job of staying with your vision of illuminating the dichotomy of our thoughts and feelings, which are rarely purely singular. - Dan.